Revision time, people! On your mark, set, go!!!!

Your prompt is to take a poem and revise it one more time. For longer poems move down four or five lines from the end and begin there. For shorter poems, take the last line of the poem to use as your first. What happens? Better?

Try to avoid the 8th revision results as so aptly demonstrated by the following tweet and pic:

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Alas, I have many poems that I revised into the second bird.

Bonus prompt: Write a Standard Operating Procedure for the second bird.